Power Hang Glider Narrative

"Jump". I leapt onto the monkey bars on the playground. Suddenly I fell off because I heard a strange noise that I had never heard before. I quickly went to check it out. The noise had led me to the reserve where finally I found out that it was a POWER HANG GLIDER. I saw the glider take off. It went soaring through the skies, doing loop the loops. A while later it was still doing astonishing tricks when putt putt putt......
"That noise doesn't sound right" I said to my friend. Next I saw it come down. "AAAAHHHH" someone screamed. "I'm going to go and get some help" I announced. The glider WAS going to crash. The wires and strings got caught around the goalpost and the propeller made it spin round and round. But then it fell off and landed in the bush. The whole school went to see if he was dead or alive. Mr Burt made his way through the crowd and discoverd he was still alive but injured. He called the amubulance so they came and took him. "Lucky he's alive " I said.

Camp

A few weeks ago we had a year 5 and 6 camp. We did lots of amazing and exciting activities from orienteering to swimming at Swim-a-Rama.
My best activity I loved was rock climbing. We first climbed the house which was for starters but we could go on any other one after the house. I almost made it to the top of the house but there was no more room for me to go.
On camp we also slept in tents which was a bit weird for me because I'd never slept in a tent before. I could hardly go to sleep because my sleeping bag was so hot and stuffy. I just couldn't go to sleep. I nearly stayed up the whole night because I had had enough sleep.
In the morning we had to wake up at 6:30 and go for a early morning jog around the field. It was tiring. I could hardly speak.
For me camp was the best school activity ever in my primary life.